August 30, 2016

Ekphrastic Challenge, July 2016: Editor’s Choice

 

Photo by Suzanne Simmons
Photograph: “Trespass” by Suzanne Simmons. “Memoria” was written by Merlin Ural Rivera for Rattle’s Ekphrastic Challenge, July 2016, and selected as the Editor’s Choice winner.

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Merlin Ural Rivera

MEMORIA

The Moskvitch left the garage twice a month.
Grandpa would turn the wheel in white gloves
and he would whistle a sad tune until
we reached the mad forests of Bulgaria.

The minty car stood on a small glade,
imprisoned by pine trees, bees and yellow linnets.
My brother looked for mushrooms
as I lay on the grass and swilled the marrow of
the trees, drunk on sinewy leaves.

Grandpa smoked a few Rodopis to the bone
and looked ten minutes younger
as his worries flew off curtain by curtain.
Branches twisted like ugly black cables and
sieved the light that touched us as gently as a night nurse.
We knew that this trip was not for nothing,
that we would return to the dark garage in the city
with a few slimy-capped mushrooms and
ears full of crickets.
The dead leaves stuck on the Moskvitch tires
would bloom on the cement for two confused seconds
and we’d know peace would elude us
until that whistle flew high against the sky.

Ekphrastic Challenge, July 2016
Editor’s Choice Winner

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Comment from the editor, Timothy Green, on his selection: “Simmons’ photograph fills me with a sense of dreamy nostalgia, but it was a disembodied nostalgia, until I read this poem, which finally gave that feeling a home. I loved the ease of the voice and the vivid details, especially Grandpa smoking himself ‘ten minutes younger.’ It’s a delightful poem, worthy of the photograph.”

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August 25, 2016

Ekphrastic Challenge, July 2016: Artist’s Choice

 

Photo by Suzanne Simmons
Photograph: “Trespass” by Suzanne Simmons. “Eco Echo: An Oldster’s Tale” was written by Devon Balwit for Rattle’s Ekphrastic Challenge, July 2016, and selected by Simmons as the Artist’s Choice winner.

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Devon Balwit

ECO ECHO: AN OLDSTER’S TALE

old man remembers
before we were here

what it was like there
he says listen before he forgets

old man says green breathed
bulged into food

took sun and made air
reached unfurled hung down

old man says green lived
that got under nails

in dirt stuff
hid things that crawled

old man says green was noisy

mouth blowing tiny

happy or warning
he shows me

old man jumps off furniture
trying to be light

like green’s singers
but he can’t lift up

old man says green
cold made it brown

changed color
heat yellow

old man says it spoke
he rubs his palms

went hush hush in fast air
and makes them whisper

old man says green held him
hid in its belly

that he climbed on its shoulders
gathered its scraps

old man makes me feel
green was like that he says

knobbed knuckles and toes
but rougher and stranger

Ekphrastic Challenge, July 2016
Artist’s Choice Winner

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Comment from the artist, Suzanne Simmons, on her selection: “’Eco Echo: An Oldster’s Tale’ both surprised and haunted me. The notion of a world in which green is obsolete and yet people remain to describe it required a leap that I was willing to take—the old man convinced me. His descriptions of green are vivid and personal; he remembers green the way we remember lost loves. The words ‘eco echo’ fit well with my image because the photo is not a double exposure but a reflection in a windowpane. Like reflections, echoes are similar to their sources but not identical; they’re more mysterious. In the last two lines of the poem the old man asks his listener to feel his knobbed knuckles and toes, as if his efforts to describe green cannot compare to the felt sense of it, as if he could pass that knowledge from his own body to another’s. The poem left me feeling parched and thirsty for the color of new grass.” (website)

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