July 20, 2012

Review by Lori A. MayBut a Storm Is Blowing by Lillian-Yvonne Bertram

BUT A STORM IS BLOWING FROM PARADISE
by Lillian-Yvonne Bertram

Red Hen Press
P.O. Box 40820
Pasadena CA 91114
ISBN: 9781597091688
2012, 104 pp., $17.95
www.redhen.org

I can’t stop looking at this book’s cover. “The Core” by Dominika Piwowar strikes me with its use of shade and space, its otherness, and not just from what is on the page, but what is missing. Here we have a stripped down woman, baring herself to us, but not showing–just hinting. Here we have one half of a fruit, the pit–its seed–removed. Where is it? How has this half of a whole been preserved? Has it been preserved or is it being offered to us, with the woman unsure of who or what she is, what she needs for herself? These questions continue on within the contents of the 2010 winner of the Benjamin Saltman Award. Lillian-Yvonne Bertram’s But A Storm Is Blowing From Paradise is divided into three sections, all giving fodder for similar consideration. What is whole and what remains? What is a shade of reality and what does the space around reality reveal?

Bertram takes bold leaps in her delivery, tailoring each poem’s form to the content in refreshing and unexpected turns. In “Medicine Lake,” the poet dismisses punctuation in a thirteen-line prose poem that runs observations together. There is a missing entity spoken to and about in this poem, for which the speaker “invent[s]” and “pretend[s]” interactions that align with the solar system. From “in the country where we are still / inventing ourselves” to planetary suppositions, the speaker debates identity alongside Saturn’s rings and “debris / so large you miss the debris entirely.”

Identity and reality are recurring themes as the poet traces landmarks real and imagined, and compares photographs snapped with a camera that “duplicates the real // that is not real enough.” Later, the speaker of “The Night My Dead Dog Comes Back” speaks of “something extragalactic” factoring into “this new real [where] none of that / was real”–again, blurring the lines between what is and what is imagined.

Just as the form of “Medicine Lake” surprises, so too will the layout of a number of poems that are spread across the page on the flipside, rearranged in “landscape.” As readers, we are forced to turn the page, turn the book, to read from a different perspective; this physical shift draws us in to “the quantum dust whisking in the eyes of deer,” or, in another poem, to contemplate how “when the heart…is removed from the body–it lives a mayfly life.”

As much as identity is questioned and explored throughout Bertram’s collection, so too is the landscape and its role as a character in its own right. Yes, the galaxy comes heavily into play, as already touched on, but the geography of America puffs up and edges in for attention in many of Bertram’s poems. From prairie fires to the Dakotas, from inner city struggles to the eerie silence of ghost towns, physical locations shift as quickly as the poet’s speakers shift thoughts. Yet even when the reflections are grounded, the speaker cannot be contained or bound to Earth, as in the poem “The New New Thing” where the speaker is “entangled / on the other side of the universe.” There is the desire, the need to always be on the move, to be removed, from one reality in favor of another.

The quest for identity–of perhaps not the quest, but the recognition that we are often more than one “thing” in our life–carries from one poem to the next, from one section to the other. Along with geographic identities and the minimization of existence in comparison to great intergalactic parallels, the speaker often draws on her marginalization as a female, as a woman continually redefining herself. In “I Was a Barking Dog,” this burst of inner analysis says it all:

My sleep as a woman

was inferior & menstrus.

I was all reason & my reason

was unjust.

Grew bored of thinking

with myself, these pictures

of my living imagination.

In the title poem, the speaker reflects on “the space around the shape” and this is what Bertram’s collection comes down to. No matter the form, no matter the density of sparseness of language, each poem takes shape and weighs equally what is and what is not. Realities are questioned, blurred, and redesigned. Identities shift and are reborn.

It is not “easy” to dive into Bertram’s collection. These are challenging poems that lead you down one path only to detour you to another. It is a complex collection that challenges, but also delights. This is, after all, a storm you decide to venture into when you open the spine and settle in to read. And just as storms are beautiful from a distance, violent from within, and we never fully understand their magnitude until they have passed over, so the poetry of But A Storm Is Blowing From Paradise leaves us in its wake to reveal what is, after all that has come, all that has been tossed in the wind.

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Lori A. May is the author of four books, including The Low-Residency MFA Handbook: A Guide for Prospective Creative Writing Students (Continuum, 2011). Her poetry and prose have appeared in publications such as Phoebe, Caper Literary Journal, Hippocampus Magazine, and qarrtsiluni. Her website is www.loriamay.com.

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February 20, 2010

Review by Lori A. MayRuin and Beauty by Deena Metzger

RUIN AND BEAUTY
By Deena Metzger

Red Hen Press
P.O. Box 3537
Granada Hills CA 91394
ISBN 978-1-59709-425-2
2009, 312 pp., $23.95
http://www.redhen.org/

For more than forty years, Deena Metzger has been demonstrating her dedication not only to penning wonderful poems, but also to living a life as a Literary Citizen. When reading the media release provided by the publisher, Red Hen Press, I immediately thought of Whitman and Emerson and the primal call for our poets to take action. Speaking of Metzger’s creed, the publisher says, “It is no longer sufficient, she believes, for the poet to be an unacknowledged legislator of the world, for the committed poet is called to engage with the full heart in the continuous activity of restoration on behalf of beauty, wisdom and the natural world.” Such a statement is an incredible preface to reading the 300+ page collection of new and selected poems. But how does the poetry answer this call?

Metzger’s poems respond beautifully. Such a substantial collection requires organization and Metzger has done well to group the poems by themed, titled sections that act as an invitation to the topics included. The first poem included in the section entitled “Service at the Earth Altar,” calls for action among us, through the chant-like verse of “Oh Great Spirit”:

Oh Great Spirit. Heal the animals. Protect the animals. Restore the
animals.

Our lives will also be healed. Our souls will be protected. Our spirits will be restored.

Oh Spirit of Raven. Oh Spirit of Wolf. Oh Spirit of Whale. Oh Spirit of
Elephant. Oh Spirit of Snake.

Teach us, again, how to live.

In this poem, we collectively beg for forgiveness, remembering those “we have slaughtered” and those “we have feared” and those “we have tortured.” Our humanity is questioned. Our own spirit is tested. A call to action is served to us on a harsh, cold platter.

Throughout this section, Metzger puts humanity in its place, elevating nature and urging life to work in harmony, for a common good. In “Opening All the Doors to the Rain,” the reader is confronted with the ethics of being blessed by nature:

In the Beginning, after the flood there was a rainbow. Now, during the
drought, this sweet interval of rain. But the question remains: Do we have
a right to pray for rain? What can we offer before we take in the rain with
our dry roots and open mouths, when the fires we are setting are seething
on the horizon?

I am stunned and awed at the simplicity of how so few words can remind us that life is not a buffet; “What can we offer before we take” is enough of a mantra to live by, and applicable to all walks of life, if you ask me. Within this statement, humanity is reborn. Actions made in response to these words would most certainly be fair, compassionate, and empathetic to all living, breathing things.

As a poet, essayist, teacher, healer, and medicine woman, Metzger offers us an abundance of necessarily heavy subject matter bundled with passion between these pages of love, rage, and hope. It comes with the territory. It is to be expected. However, every now and then, Metzger throws us a break, a moment to stretch our legs, breathe in, breathe out, and within these moments we are given poems slightly lighter, slightly tongue-in-cheek, but always refreshing.

I was struck with the poem “Do Poems Have Gender or Sex?” within the section entitled “The Dark Animal Gods.” Within this prose poem are beautiful nuggets of lines too pure and too full of wonderment not to share. But, first, an introduction from the beginning lines:

OK. There are poems that both men and women write, and then there are poems
that come only from a woman. Also, of course, poems that could only come from
a man.

While Metzger introduces us to the subject by pondering the either/or of gender, we are quickly entertained by one-liners that wow us, and not only make us think, but make us smile and truly dig deep in questioning gender roles. “So, I am wondering,” the narration tells us, “what kind of poem goes to church / with a gun in its pocket?” From this point on, the poem counter-plays between male and female poems, the roles of gender within the poem, and the personified genders of poems. Metzger’s mastery is sheer brilliance.

Whether you have read Metzger’s many previous collections or, like me, are new to the poet’s power, Ruin and Beauty is a welcome cornucopia of pleasures, dares, warnings, and resolutions. For each moment of ruin, Metzger offers suggestions for reviving beauty. Where there seems to be little hope, the poems subtly shift and provide some. Metzger is a master of her language, a guiding force for her pen, and through her substantial collection, she is also a poet’s poet, one who knows how to solicit emotion and call for action.

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Lori A. May is a poet, novelist, and freelance writer whose work has appeared in publications such as The Writer, Tipton Poetry Journal, and anthologies such as Van Gogh’s Ear. She is the author of stains: early poems and two novels, Moving Target and The Profiler. May is also Managing Editor at Marick Press and Founding Editor of The Ambassador Poetry Project. For more information, visit http://www.loriamay.com.

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January 30, 2010

Review by Lori A. MayThen, Something by Patricia Fargnoli

THEN, SOMETHING
by Patricia Fargnoli

Tupelo Press
The Eclipse Mill, Loft 305
PO Box 1767
North Adams, MA 01247
ISBN 978-1-932195-79-8
2009, 84 pp., $16.95
http://www.tupelopress.org

I am of the age when parents no longer resemble the friendly supervisors of youth. Now, with each passing year, I watch as the once lively duo slowly fades into a subtle, calm battle with time. We suffer mortality. It is what unites us. And yet, there is beauty in witnessing a life come and go. Amidst pain and suffering, we endure. We love. We fight. Sometimes for our own lives. Sometimes for the lives of others.

It is with such consideration that I find myself pleasantly drawn into the latest collection from Patricia Fargnoli. Then, Something offers an honest approach to human mortality, celebrating lives lived, banishing memories best forgotten, remembering those most cherished.

When I read the poem “Applewood Senior Apartments, April Again,” I cannot help but recall my own visits to elderly family and friends. Fargnoli draws the reader in, inviting us to see through the white walls of solitude, as a lifetime passes through shadows along the window:

You’d been told it would come to this, the turning away
into smaller and smaller rooms. The footsteps upstairs
are not anymore a husband’s, but the thin neighbor
              who comes and goes beyond your window,
his sick cat in a carrier.

We all eventually arrive at this place. Fargnoli not only takes us there, but leads us through the quiet, refined passivity of a lifetime reduced to memories:

Once, you had a life and it was sometimes good.
Your hair was auburn then, you could run.
If only your legs would move today in that remembered
             ease and rhythm.

It doesn’t matter that I am still too young to experience this as a personal flashback; I have seen the eyes of family whose youth has faded, supported their limbs when they could not support themselves, and remembered life where little remains. Life is given to us, and then slowly withdrawn. Fargnoli captures these moments of breath, of beating hearts, and challenges us to breathe life back into the stolen moments of aging.

The poet confronts mortality again and again in this stunning, perceptive collection. “Easter Morning” is a favorite, for its frankness and tongue-in-cheek reactions to strangers, readers, and symbolic figures. Again, Fargnoli’s narration admits concern

about death, how it will come too soon.
Part of me wants release
but we cling to life, most of us,
with passion — or not.

Within this poem, the observations of others, and in particular an “awkward woman,” the narrator wonders about “becoming reluctantly old” and how she “live[s] slowly these days.” It is as though there is much more to read through what Fargnoli presents to sense the line between life and death, passionate desire and comfort with ambiguity.

Fargnoli stretches beyond the immediate to recount lives lost and the impact of losing loved ones long ago. In “The Losing,” the poet resurrects and personifies a mother, if only to relive the loss:

The mother who left in my childhood
is leaving again in my dream.
[…]
My mother is leaving again from the memory
of a white double bed,
[…]
My mother left all my days and nights
and went into the illness for which

there was, in those days, no cure
and no slowing it down.

Fargnoli may dance with death in Then, Something, but this is not to be perceived as a solemn collection. For with every life lost, with each year of aging, Fargnoli offers a glimpse of that impenetrable human spirit that pushes us to carry on. Call it faith, label it as determination, there is hope in poems such as “Melancholy in Late October”:

I have become extravagant —
I have turned on all the lamps in the house —
all day I keep them burning.

Yes, I am of the age where youthful parents are but a memory. I am, myself, not quite as energetic as I was a decade ago. But through Fargnoli’s collection of perceptive, sensitive images, I choose not only to remember lives lost and years worn on, I embrace the spirit in which lives were lived with vigor.

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Lori A. May is a poet, novelist, and freelance writer whose work has appeared in publications such as The Writer, Tipton Poetry Journal, and anthologies such as Van Gogh’s Ear. She is the author of stains: early poems and two novels, Moving Target and The Profiler. May is also Managing Editor at Marick Press and Founding Editor of The Ambassador Poetry Project. For more information, visit http://www.loriamay.com.

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