January 25, 2012

Review by Claire KeyesThe Green Cottage by Michelle Gillett

THE GREEN COTTAGE
by Michelle Gillett

The Ledge Press
40 Maple Ave
Bellport, NY 11713
2010, 29 pp., $8.00
http://www.theledgemagazine.com

The Green Cottage of Michelle Gillett’s chapbook appears to be an actual place that has gotten passed down to the poet’s generation. It stands for continuity but also as a place for closer connection to the natural world (“Vespids,” “Not there,” “Dead Man’s Float”). “Love Poem 137” depicts the green cottage as a place where the loved one waits. Michelle Gillett casts a wider net with her central metaphor; the green cottage is a place where memory coheres—not just personal or familial but memories that haunt the 20th century including the depredations of World War II. With her ability to marry the lyrical with the political, Gillett challenges her readers to open themselves to themes of death and dying, to a sense of time passing and the inevitable loss of loved ones, but also to sustaining love for other humans and the natural world.

For all the seriousness of her themes, Gillett has a delicate, lyric sensibility. Experiment with reading the opening poem of this collection out loud to yourself. Let its music play over your senses. Don’t hurry after meaning. It’s there in the hands of a poet for whom the lyric still matters. “Vespids” opens with the line: “It’s down/ The hornets’ nest.” Clearly, this is a destruction not to be mourned:

Now first sting of frost on the ground
And we see no threat
only the hollow where harm lived.
Everything the season has housed has flown.

How interesting that she employs “sting” in connection with the frost, at the same time calling up the hornets. “Ground” chimes nicely with “down” just as “first” and “Frost” create a different tone. Similarly the alliterative “hollow,” “harm” and “has housed” give us language chosen for maximum immediacy and music.

The center of the poem makes a leap back in time “when we were children” and recalls childhood exuberance “rising over the roofs not like souls/ detached from bodies, but as bodies/ resisting the world.” The final lines of the poem temper that exuberance by returning to the hornets’ nest and its removal:

                                          Light in my hands
when I lifted it from the eave, forever gone,
no longer wadded in industry, this testament
to vanishing is too fragile to hold.

The nest as a “testament to vanishing” brings the poem back to a more mature understanding of the world. Everything passes; nobody can “resist the world.” But how tender the poem is, how aware of the fragility of life.

In “Documentary,” Gillett strikes a tough pose that only belies the tenderness underneath. The scene is a nightmare from the Holocaust, the voice a disinterested observer:

Why waste bullets on children
when they will suffocate under the weight
of bodies heavy as doors?

The rest of the poem concerns itself with the children who live in the nearby village. They have to “drum on saucepans/ to drown out the sounds” of the mass murders. One of the child-victims survives this horror and “is in her seventies now, smiling for the camera/ against a back-drop of oaks.” The poem concludes with two sentences from this woman:

I remember the sun was shining.
I remember holding onto the roots.

How does one survive the horrors of war? The answer lies in the act of “holding on to the roots.” Literally, the child grabbed onto what was available and solid. As metaphor, her action is more resonant and stands for not giving up, for being active and resistant. The sun, shining down on the scene, is indifferent. “The green cottage” might be an escape from the world, a place of restoration and revival—boating on the lake, swimming with one’s sisters. But the world’s ugliness and cruelty intrude—at least to a poet as conscious and aware as Michelle Gillett.

She does not, however, despair. “Barred Owl,” the penultimate poem in the chapbook is typical of the nature poems in this collection, presenting the bird as in communication with the humans “asleep in the cottage.” Aware of the humans, the barred owl leaves “packets of mouse and finch” for them. He is a bird of prey, after all, and he “stalks the smallest shadows”:

                        He swallows
them whole the way you tried
to swallow grief, father, mother
dying in turn and after them, the sister who
asked for songs. All night rubbing her back,
half-remembering words to Night and Day, Blue Moon.

Forging a link between herself and the bird, the poet calls up grief she “tried to swallow” in mourning the deaths of family members, with the implication that she didn’t succeed. More grief must come, and with it the necessary music to soothe her soul. The music takes shape in the repetition of the “s” sounds in “whole” and “swallow,” the “sister who asked for songs.” The connection between the poet and the barred owl can only go so far: “His repeated notes trouble your soul–/ you who are nothing but gristle and gut, / cannot thrive on darkness.” In fact, Michelle Gillett has made it clear in the poems of this volume that she prefers “the light that stirs me awake,” and that she has developed her own “vocabulary for vision: angle, focus, light.”

The Green Cottage offers us a refuge and the opportunity to reconnect with the natural world. At the same time, Michelle Gillett’s poems resist the idea that there is any escape from reality.

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When not writing reviews, literary essays, and poems, Claire Keyes can be found teaching poetry courses for the life-long learning program at Salem State University in Massachusetts or singing in her hospice choir. She actually prefers to publish her poems on-line in places like the Umbrella Journal, Tattoohighway.org and Verse Wisconsin. For a fuller experience of her poems, check out The Question of Rapture, published by Mayapple Press.

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March 15, 2010

Review by Claire Keyes Six Lips by Penelope Scambly Schott

SIX LIPS
by Penelope Scambly Schott

Mayapple Press, 2009
408 N. Lincoln Street
Bay City, MI 48708
ISBN 978-0-932412-84-3
2010, 80 pp., $15.95
www.mayapplepress.com

Six Lips is dazzling. Were it for its language alone, I would savor these poems again and again if only to get some relief from the pedestrian gumbo of contemporary speech. Schott takes her readers for a ride as thrilling for us poetry readers as “Avatar.” Her imagination knows no bounds and she accomplishes her feats with the time-honored tool of language alone. Six lips? At least.

Even so, she doesn’t fly off into the stratosphere. Like Frost’s climber of birches, she knows that “Earth’s the right place for love.” She says as much in “Why I Did Not Wish to Float in Space,” one of my favorite poems in the book. She opens with a series of questions reminiscent of God lecturing Job on his powers. For example: “Who spread the western horizon to snip/ the orange sun in half.” She then proceeds to ask an even more impossible question:

Can you feel how our planet spins in a void,
how the shallow mantle, hauling its fur coat
of forest, its slippery skin of ocean, seems
inconsequential over the molten core?

Note the rightness of the line-break after “fur coat” and the aptness of the ocean’s “slippery skin.” Note also that as the poem builds, it becomes more intimate:

I’ve lost my footing in the belly of curled roots,
and I’m scared of falling, of lurching clear out
into space—nothing on earth to touch. Pull me
back by a finger, will you?

What captures me in this poem is the surprising turn it takes to the intimate gesture of “Pull me/ back by a finger, will you?” Her meditation on the vastness of the universe turns into a love poem, concluding with “Please?/ Here, in the motionless house, my face/ brushed by your glance.” What makes Six Lips so compelling is how unpredictable Schott is.

Penelope Scambly Schott is unabashedly female and yet, in a way, post-feminist. She simply is who she is and more power to her. “Counting the Body,” the long poem which occupies the center of this collection, makes her attitude towards herself abundantly clear. Each section plays with a number. She requires

Six lips to sip the sublime,
    two for the mouth and four for the vulva
      plump as succulents and shining with dew—
         ah, youth; ah, time.

The naturalness of the rhyme (lips/sip) and the abundant alliteration characterize her versifying and also lead to the nostalgic note at the end. These are not the poems of a young woman, but youthful exuberance pervades the volume.

In the last section of the poem, she imagines what it would be like “If I Had Ten Thumbs”:

I would wear pink leather shoes with velcro straps
I would strike matches on the sole of my shoe
I would suck firmly on my ten wet thumbs
I would practice exactly how to suck
with rapt attention and rhythm
so as to gratify any man
and I would do it
yes I would
do that
yes

The voice of these poems is often playful and funny. At the same time the overall tenor of this book is conditioned by the impending death of her mother. The poems get darker as the poet meditates on time and aging. As she says in “Eclipse”: “This is the world that ends over and over and then/ goes on without us, our tiny smudge of time.”

Schott is blessed, however, with a flexible consciousness. At home with animals or the stars, she gives a sense of her life as a succession of lives. Aware of the natural world, she suggests the transmigration of her soul into a screech owl or a horse. Such poems tend to be upbeat and thrilling, but the excruciating demise of her mother haunts the speaker of these poems. She finally gives way to addressing her mother’s death and dying.

Typically, she refuses sentimentality. In “Heart Failure,” she writes: “This is the year I would like to find pity. I would like/ to hurt for my mother the way I ache for my children.” As much as she would like to develop this feeling, it eludes her: a failure of her heart: “I want to be sad that she’s eighty-seven and fading.” Through her use of anaphora and an accretion of brilliant details, Schott builds up the image of her mother:

She lives in her elegant house like a black pearl
from a broken oyster drifting under reefs in a bay.
she lives in her house like a startled rabbit unable
to finish crossing the road.

The poem startles when the speaker imagines killing her mother, as an act of pity:

                                     If I had enough pity,
I would dare squeeze her fragile neck and kiss
her forehead as I press down on her windpipe and keep
on pressing with my strong and generous thumbs.

The poem, however, does not end there. Schott’s spirit is too magnanimous, and her mother changes, showing a gentle “appreciation” of nature that Schott finds surprising. Her mother “watches the squirrels scamper up black bark/ like acrobats of joy.” In fact, Schott doesn’t recognize the person her mother has become:

This drowning old lady is not my mother. Not
abrupt. As I stroke her knuckles, grace glints
in our salt hands.

Drowning because she is dying, the mother undergoes a kind of transformation, as does the daughter. For both of them, there is a communion, a touch of being to being.

While I admired A is for Anne, Schott’s previous book, for her deft handling of the life of Anne Hutchinson, Six Lips takes its readers to a new place through her language and style, but also through her openness, her dexterity, her seemingly boundless range of being in the world. She’s a stunning poet.

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Claire Keyes reviewed A is for Anne for Rattle and would be happy to review future books by Penelope Schott. Disclaimer: they share the same publisher. Mayapple Press published The Question of Rapture, a book of poems, in 2008. To be honest, Six Lips is far better than Rapture. Claire Keyes lives modestly in Marblehead, Massachusetts.

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February 5, 2009

Review by Carole Borges

THE QUESTION OF RAPTURE
by Claire Keyes

Mayapple Press
408 N. Lincoln Street
Bay City, MI 48708
ISBN: 978-0932412-690
2008, 72 pp., $14.95
www.mayapplepress.com

In her first volume of poetry, Claire Keyes steps onto the literary stage with a maturity and mastery of craft that reflects an educated passion for words and the possession of a perception that fully and courageously embraces both the light and dark side of our human psyche.

Her childhood poems celebrate the details of American life: the drunken uncles, the clatter of dishes, the sound of a piano tinkling across a lawn, and the smell of fresh washed clothes. Childhood games reflect the seriousness adulthood will demand.

In “Playing Cards with My Father,” Keyes writes:

…We were green as spring clover, as shoots
of March grass, green and thirsty
for an afternoon with him at the card table, other kids
reduced to skating or cracked sidewalks, shooting hoops,
playing Double-Dutchies, their chants and rope-slapping
mere child’s play. Another hand another.
Don’t skunk me, Pop. My mother watches from the kitchen.
Her game is playing house. With my flair
for the father-tongue, its rules and syntax, I know
winning is better than losing.
If you don’t have that straight, pretend.
He takes one card, tucks it into his hand, lifts his eyes.
I’ll raise you, he says.

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