December 5th, 2011
Review by Jeannine Hall Gailey
A WITNESS IN EXILE
by Brian Spears
Louisiana Literature Press
SLU Box 10792
Hammond, LA 70402
ISBN 978-0945083290
2011, 72 pp., $14.95
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Brian Spears introduces the subject matter of the book right in the title: A Witness in Exile refers to his disenchantment and estrangement from the religion of his childhood as a Jehovah’s Witness and because of this, his family of origin as well. Some of the best poetic moments in the book use to great effect the combination of a warm sense of humor and a poignant desire to believe.
A secondary theme throughout the book is Spears’ attachment to landscapes (Florida, New Mexico, California, and Louisiana, in particular) that seem in many poems to be threatened both ecologically and spiritually. Many of them have whimsical titles like “One Day the Ruins of the Galleria Mall Will Shelter Armadillos” or “’Salons are collecting hair to soak up oil.’” The speaker’s exiled wanderings keep him pondering the vulnerability and perpetually-changing nature of the world around him.
I have to admit that what drew me to the book initially was the quality of the poems’ voice – an idiosyncratic, approachable voice that I believe many regular readers of Rattle would enjoy. (In fact, I immediately scanned the acknowledgement page to see if Rattle would be there, because the poems would seem very at home in one of their issues!) Spears writes poems that are playful without being complicated, intelligent while still being fairly direct. The echoes of Biblical language in many of the poems elevate the sonics in a way that reminded me sometimes of song, sometimes of the cadences of the church service. “i sing of Brian, born of God” reminded me of both E.E. Cummings and a psalm, the tone teetering between resignation and triumph:
who spent his life entrenched at prayer
his palms clasped so, his shoe soles bare…
That Brian is no longer here.
His parents say he is not one
of their body, though Christ is love…
This kind of bare-knuckled autobiography works well because Spears chooses painstakingly authentic details–the flattering and unflattering, the dramatic and the mundane–with witty mindfulness.
The second thing that attracted me to the book was the way in which the author approached the religion of his youth–with both wry distance and with humane respect. I believe it’s difficult to treat the subject of belief and unbelief well, and Spears has done a great job of it in this collection. The final poem of the book, in particular, “Jubilate Patro,” in the form of Christopher Smart’s poem “For I Will Consider My Cat Jeoffry,” is particularly heart-wrenching. It describes the speaker’s conflicting feelings for his father, the father’s struggle with Alzheimer’s, and the lessons the speaker learned from his father:
For his favorite animal was a porcupine, a creature of defense…
For when Louis Jordan came on the stereo he would grab my mother and twirl her
in the living room of our trailer so that the floors shook…
For he taught me there are things more important than family and sometimes I hate him for that
For his father is Jehovah and he has no son anymore
The portrait the speaker of the poem paints of his father is one of pained love, anger, and acute observation.
A Witness in Exile is not divided into sections, but the general motion of the book is from the impersonal–descriptions of the worlds around the writer–to more personal poems. This made the second half of the book more compelling to me, because these poems are the ones that highlight Spears’ deft use of tone and language.
Overall, Brian Spears’ first collection demonstrates the humour that can be mined in the apocalyptic, the love that can be salvaged from broken family relationships, and a faith based in an unblinking consideration of the fragile human concepts of truth, God, trust, and forgiveness.
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Jeannine Hall Gailey is the author of Becoming the Villainess (Steel Toe Books, 2006) and She Returns to the Floating World (Kitsune Books, 2011.) Her work has been featured on NPR’s The Writer’s Almanac, Verse Daily, and in The Year’s Best Fantasy and Horror. Her poems have appeared in journals like The Iowa Review, The Seattle Review, and Prairie Schooner. She volunteers as an editorial consultant for Crab Creek Review and currently teaches at the MFA program at National University. Her web site is www.webbish6.com.
December 12th, 2010
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Jeannine Hall Gailey
I FORGOT TO TELL YOU THE MOST IMPORTANT PART…
Without this knowledge, you’ll never make it:
it’s one part fashion advice and two parts survivalist.
Learn to talk to people so they think you’re honest
but never be honest. Cooking eggs may save your life,
so crack them, neat and firm, pour into the skillet,
stir gently. Forget about your shoes; people will judge
you by your shine, the imminent light you offer them.
Be a lamppost in wilderness, be the elephant
in the showroom. If you steal the idol, make sure
to carry a weighted bag of sand. No surprises: we’ve lied
about having it all. It’s either the piano or the pit viper.
Cinderella’s shoe came off at midnight because it hurt,
and Red Riding Hood’s real story involves cannibalism and a striptease.
Don’t wear red lipstick, don’t you kiss your mother with that mouth?
Long bangs hide a multitude of sins. Ask your grandmother
about the herbs she used to swallow while pregnant.
The butterflies here didn’t start out black, they were white
as onion skin—and the forest was more ominous
before the smokestacks. Well, here’s your little basket
and coat, sweetheart, sweetmeat, smile like you mean it,
shake what you’ve got while you’ve got it,
go out into the world and knock them dead.
–from Rattle #33, Summer 2010
September 17th, 2010
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Jeannine Hall Gailey
TO A SELF-PROCLAIMED MANIC DEPRESSIVE EX-STRIPPER
POET, AFTER A READING
Remember: you are a blank page
no amount of shopping can cure.
One night you go out in tassels
and the next like a nun, but we still
love you. Can’t hold your liquor?
Never mind. Little angel, little bombthrower—
where would our malls
be without you? And the readings
you give in your corset are always good
for a crowd. I didn’t stop to give you
any advice. Get moving, screams Self
Magazine, or get medicated. Stay in the sun.
One more roast beef sandwich to watch you
wear yourself out for the muse. In the mirror,
you continue to shrink and I tell you—
eat this piece of cherry pie. It’s laced with cinnamon,
and maybe lithium. Also, write, but remember
writing will not be the death of you, or the life.
Keep watching the skies. Or skis. Sign a happy tune.
If this world doesn’t know the magic they behold,
create it for them. Remember to paint over the lines.
Forget your high heels and dance, Cinderella, dance.
–from Rattle #24, Winter 2005
December 10th, 2009
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LUCIFER AT THE STARLITE
by Kim Addonizio
W. W. Norton & Company, Inc.
500 Fifth Avenue
New York, New York 10110
ISBN 0393068528
2009, 96 pp., $23.95
www.wwnorton.com
I’ve been a fan of Kim Addonizio’s poetry for many years now, so I was happy to have the opportunity to review her latest book, Lucifer at the Starlite. In this book, she turns the humorous and gritty beam of her attention on, yes, as you might expect, love and relationships, but also religion, global disasters, and the mythology of women, encompassing abandoned small towns, real and imagined book burnings, marines discussing sex. She includes poems on the Iraq war, poems about the 2004 tsunami, pulling personal events and world events together. I enjoyed the new direction in Addonizio’s work, her mood here both playful and mournful, especially the persona poems.
The title poem, like many of the poems in the book, is written in persona, imagining Satan in a dim nightclub, seemingly magnanimous, offering:
For every town, a marching band…
for each worker, a place beneath the table.
For every forward step a stumbling.
A shadow over every starlit thing.
This poem offers us an inside glimpse into a character who claims that, unlike God, “I show/ my face, I’m a real regular.” The menace of the last few lines belies the seemingly gregarious character at the beginning of the poem. These tonal shifts are interesting to me; they illustrate how persona poems can allow a reader an inside glimpse into characters they might not (willingly) imagine. This poem also establishes the darker tone of the book, one that looks evil squarely in the face.
As a writer of persona poems about fairy tales myself, someone who enjoys a new spin on the classics, I was especially charmed by the poems invoking fairy tale characters. Addonizio brings out the bite in the old tales. Beginning with section II, “Jukebox,” she warns the reader in a poem called “Where Childhood Went” that:
The teeth sold to the fairies
are tombstones in the graveyard of the fireflies…
…the old dolls are doing well; they smile and smile.
And the witch? Darling, the witch was real.
In another poem, the huntsman from Snow White enigmaticallyconfesses that he murdered the girl rather than saving her, but says “Think what you like:/ that I spared her, that she sang/ while keeping house for seven little men.” He encourages this imagining further at the end of the poem, where he tells the audience that
I remember my place in the story.
I let the girl go
into those fabled woods, in winter,
while the snow fell around us,
white on her black hair,
white on her blue Aryan eyes,white on her pretty, open mouth.
These lines, set against the context of poems about Iraq and eerily echoing another poem in which a marine describes killing a child in Vietnam in the same way he describes having sex with his girlfriend, become even more chilling.
In the final section, “I Am Going to Have to Take Your Keys,” the fairy tale themes resurface, first in “Hansel,” which rewrites the familiar tale with political overtones in a language of post-traumatic, urgent fragments:
We were set upon by rebels guerrillas tribesmen revolutionaries who they raped cut off and stabbed left I my sister Gretel, Gretel for dead graves hands…
The organization of the book itself, into sections named “Happy Hour,” “Jukebox,” Dance Floor,” and “I Am Going to Have to Take Your Keys” might hint at Addonizio’s familiar narrative of love and bars and drinking oneself into oblivion, but it is clear that the titles are used as ironic juxtaposition here against the more serious nature of this collection. In this book, Addonizio attempts to organize catastrophes both personal and global, pondering the nature of good and evil, the effects of chaos on individuals and countries. It is a book about creating meaning out of the detritus of troubled times. Lucifer at the Starlite is a manic, ambitious collection that ends on a note of hope, a hope based in the joy of creating art:
So I got my harmonica
and played a bit of Sonny Terry…
I don’t know if he listened, if it lita match to the damp cigarette of his joy…
but maybe it did
in some small, unrecorded way.
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Jeannine Hall Gailey’s first book of poetry, Becoming the Villainess, was published by Steel Toe Books. Poems from the book were featured on NPR’s The Writer’s Almanac and on Verse Daily; two were included in 2007’s The Year’s Best Fantasy and Horror. She was awarded a 2007 Dorothy Sargent Rosenberg Prize for Poetry and a 2007 Washington State Artist Trust GAP grant. Her poems have appeared in The Iowa Review, The Columbia Poetry Review, and Ninth Letter. She volunteers as an editorial consultant for Crab Creek Review and currently teaches at the MFA program at National University.
January 8th, 2009
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ADVICE GIVEN TO ME BEFORE MY WEDDING
Better to be the lover than the beloved, you’ll have passion.
Better to be the beloved, a sure thing, a lifetime of that.
He is more beautiful but you,
you have more power. Which is to say,
you are just like your brother. Lift your eyes
and people do what you say. Who knows why.
Men are like breakfast cereal. You have to pick one.
Fish in the sea, a dime a dozen. They are singing for you, now.
Keep your own bank account. Keep working.
Give him a blow job, and he’ll volunteer to take out the trash.
You are mine, says the beloved, and I am yours.
Whither you go I will go. Honey and milk are under her tongue.
Cancer and Taurus, very compatible.
You’re the hard-charger, he’s the homemaker.
Don’t stop wearing lipstick. Don’t put on any weight.
Don’t buy the dress too soon. If you go on the pill, your breasts will swell.
One day you might regret. You might do better.
You could do worse. One man’s as good as another.
Wear my old pearls. Here’s the blue, a handkerchief embroidered with tears.
If you won’t wear heels, you’ll look short in the pictures.
If you don’t wear a veil, people will say you’re not a virgin.
Good luck, glad tidings, a teddie, a toaster. So long, farewell.
–from Rattle #29, Summer 2008
