September 30th, 2011
Kathi Stafford
BLUE POODLE
by Georgia Jones-Davis
Finishing Line Press
P.O. Box 1626
Georgetown, Kentucky 40324
ISBN 1-59924-772-0
29 pp., $14.00
www.finishinglinepress.com
Blue Poodle, a recently released chapbook of poems by Georgia Jones-Davis, provides the reader with a rich variety of images, woven together in surprising and provocative rhythms. Some of these poems focus on the relationship between mother and child, but they are so expertly rendered in Jones-Davis’ unique voice that stereotypes are sidestepped.
For example, in “Put Me Away,” an aging mother echoes the sentiment of Sharon Olds in “I Go Back to May 1937”: “Do what you are going to do.” The woman in “Put Me Away” is not a cheery mother: “From the beginning/you emptied my life./ Now you empty my house–/ one chair, one table,/one tooth at a time. / You take everything—gold rings, the shoe-maker, France.” As a mother, I read these lines and worry about whether this witty recitation might one day be my own. The speaker recalls that “My childhood was gassed,/not my body,” summing up the violence she has survived only to feel trapped and resentful in her later years.
Next, the mother also rails against the oxygen tube that makes her feel like a dog on a leash—as well as her recognition that she wanted the “roller-skating girl/I was/when I was taken away/from me.” The enormous anger of the mother rolls over this portrayal: “I gained only thirteen pounds/with you./ I barely gave birth/to you at all.” Her separation from her own body and the child of her own body is a bleak evocation of a broken chord between self-identity and maternal responsiveness. An underlying question is the extent to which mothers seek a mirror image of themselves in their daughters.
Another poem that is especially effective is “Blue Poodle,” the title poem. A mother and a daughter wear matching dresses with strong implications. Having subjected my own daughter to matching outfits until she put her seven-year-old foot down, I was intrigued by the symbolism, as well as the personal connection I felt to this subject. The poem opens with these lines: “You are girdled in your mother’s/Navajo concho belt,/the black leather sleek.” Already the weight and restriction of the heavy belt pushes down on the reader.
Later in this poem, Jones-Davis moves on to a striking comparison between a mother and daughter: “At the governor’s tea you modeled/mother-daughter squaw dresses,/pale pink with silver bric-a-brac,/ flared by crinoline petticoats. How smug/and pretty she looked, how they flashed,/ her conchos, when she swirled./ Always small in your mother’s eyes.” The symbolism of the dress as a social front one wears in society is powerful in the vision of “squaw dresses” and their implicit subjugation to the masculine governor. The mother holds the power of beauty, while the daughter knows she is “always small” in the eyes of her mother.
I called my daughter as soon as I read this poem, worried I’d done permanent damage to her psyche with the whole matching dress routine. She assured me that she recalled our peach and pink flared dresses with pleasure, as well as the red outfits with Christmas trees on them. She admitted that she had liked these dresses, but that one day, “I just wanted to blend in at a certain age. You never blend in when you’re wearing the same dress as your mom, you know.”
The image of the red and black plaid dresses that she had rejected at the time flashed into my mind. I remember bribing her with pixie sticks a couple of times to get her to wear them, but those dresses were the end of the look-alike era.
Next, Jones-Davis recalls the odd blue poodle toy her mother got her when she was seven: “Valentine’s Day./ The legs moved, head swiveled,/ its tongue was a fleck of bright red flannel,/ the cloth of its body trunk velveteen, the curls of its fur/ the color of sky/ at the first sign of snow.” Mothers and their gifts are sometimes innocent, sometimes weighted with conflict and turmoil.
The conclusion moves on to hold up those conchos from the belt as “full moons that rule the roots of warring women, / unblinking eyes of the sleepless shark,/ scalloped blossoms tarnished by years of freezes.” This brilliant comparison plays out the conflict between mother and daughter, the shark of bad dreams, and the “years of freezes” that have damaged the unending vines that tie these women together.
These narrative poems are only two examples of the depth and symbolic riches that flash in this remarkable collection. Jones-Davis has demonstrated her keen eye again and again throughout this work.
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Kathi Stafford has been both poetry editor and senior editor at Southern California Review. Her poetry, book reviews, and interviews have appeared in many journals, such as Hiram Poetry Review, Connecticut River Review, Chiron Review, Nerve Cowboy, and Southern California Review. Her poetry has been anthologized recently in Chopin and Cherries and Sea of Alone: Poems for Hitchcock.
September 29th, 2011
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Lynne Knight
AGAINST ORDER
Tear the line into pieces.
Open it out:
Let silence be
part of all that must be
said.
I can’t. I can’t.
It looks so disorganized. I want
to move it like furniture
back into place.
It’s a curse, your obsession for order,
my lover says, wanting me
wild—
So, to justify myself, I point out
that light in the night sky
may be traveling, but the stars stay
where they are.
Or do they?
What if some night Cassiopeia
fell apart,
splashed down like water?
What use the well-appointed bed,
the vacuumed rug,
the alphabetically arranged books
if a star came splashing down
like water, fiery water,
burning everything in its path?
All my molecules about to scatter—
just the thought of it makes me clutch
the sheets, press myself into the mattress—
but ah, the wonder of it, to be
moving inside my lover’s
arms then, any second bound
to explode—
–from Rattle #26, Winter 2006
September 28th, 2011
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David Jordan
LET’S MEET YESTERDAY
Puzzling over his date book,
our chairman says: The next meeting
will be—hmmmm. Yesterday.
That must be wrong, don’t you think?
Not at all. I’d love to meet yesterday.
I’d ride in on my red Schwinn,
the one with white rubber mud flaps,
battery-powered horn hidden
in the crossbar, dented fender
where I clobbered the neighbor lady’s
parked car. I’d bring Midnight, my dog
Pop shot after he caught distemper,
and Calico, my cat who died
after Walter Bongi kicked her. I’d sit
on that yellow plastic kitchen chair
I chewed a hole in during a tense
moment listening to “Bobby Benson
and the B-Bar-B Riders.” We’d drink
Bosco, eat Moon Pies. During the break,
we’d argue whether Duke Snider
and the Brooklyn Dodgers are better
than Willie Mays and the New York
Giants. I’d jot notes on a lined sheet
of paper made with wood chips
big as my fingernail, then wad
it into the back pocket of my jeans
with the iron-on patches at the knees
and go home to Mom Quigley,
who would feed me cinnamon rolls
and sing “The Old Rugged Cross”
while she sweeps the floor, never once
mentioning the stroke that put her
in a coma for five years before she died.
–from Rattle #26, Winter 2006
September 27th, 2011
Tom C. Hunley
I CAN’T SLEEP SO I’LL TELL YOU A STORY
Every cricket chirping sounds, to me,
like my son’s garage band must sound
to the neighbor who calls, twice a week,
and threatens to call the cops, but never does.
You can’t call the cops on crickets.
You can’t even call their parents.
I can hear a train in the distance.
In the distance, people are making
even more distance
between themselves and this place.
Years ago, when I was teaching poetry
at a prison, miles away
from the nearest bus stop,
I used to hitchhike right in front of the prison.
I was always surprised when anyone stopped.
I wondered if my thumb screamed
“not the thumb of an escaped convict!”
Once a blonde picked me up
on her way back from visiting her husband.
She was beautiful like a sunset, if a sunset
had been raised in a trailer park.
Her husband had burned down their house
with her in it, her and her mother.
Change of heart, he rushed back in
for her, but left his mother-in-law to the flames.
The blonde shrugged that he still excited her,
said he asked her to wear skirts with no panties
on visits. I don’t know what my face said,
but she flipped her skirt up, just for a second,
said “Now you believe me.” My face
said I was embarrassed, and she laughed.
I lie here thinking of all the places
people are going where I haven’t been,
thinking of the place where that prisoner had been,
a place where I gawked at the doorway,
but didn’t knock, and never mind the moon,
never mind the stars, I lie here
in the noisy darkness, thinking
of all the places it could take a person.
–from Rattle #26, Winter 2006
September 26th, 2011
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Jane Hirshfield
THOSE WHO CANNOT ACT
“Those who act will suffer,
suffer into truth”—
What Aeschylus omitted:
those who cannot act will suffer too.
The sister banished into exile.
The unnamed dog
soon killed.
Even the bystanders vanish,
one by one,
peripheral, in pain unnoticed while
–from Rattle #26, 2006
