July 16th, 2011

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Anne Haines

WHAT THIS POEM WILL DO

This poem cannot bring you back.
This poem cannot make the clouds
move more quickly or slowly in the sky,
cannot change the weather. This poem
cannot return you to a happy childhood,
erase a painful one. This poem will
not clear your skin, condition your hair,
wash your dishes, mend your jeans.
It won’t find you a lover, not even
if you recite it three times backwards.
It won’t even find me a lover
and I wrote the thing. This poem won’t
stop time, email your advisor for that extension,
pay the plumber or the piper. This
poem does not pay its taxes. It is not
a good citizen. It fails to vote
or show up for jury duty.
This poem will overturn your scrabble game,
take a bite from every food and leave
the rest. This poem is not housebroken.
All night you hear it whining,
missing its mother, chewing your best shoes
and begging to be let out.

from Rattle #34, Winter 2010

July 15th, 2011

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Review by Kyle McCord

COMPENDIUM
by Kristina Marie Darling

Cow Heavy Books
22812 St. Joan Street
Saint Clair Shores, MI 48080
2011, 52 pp., $12.00
www.cowheavybooks.com

Typically, I try not to think too deeply about cover images and how they relate to a work. But when the book I’m preparing to read features a cover with a surrealist collage of a woman with a darkly adorned bird head, accompanied by a man holding his own face, I will admit to taking some time to mull over the significance of the image. And, without a doubt, this image is a good precursor to Compendium, Kristina Marie Darling’s second book. Like the picture itself, the book is a splice of a multiplicity of striking and curious images. When seen together, these images strike a strange mélange of tones—at once sinister and intimate—that draw the reader deeper into the fringes of literature where the phantasmal is the reality and the unfinished is the whole story.

I should forefront this with a bit of a confession: I’ve never been a fan of exceedingly short poems, a type of verse that makes up nearly a third of this work. Yes, it’s true. I’m that annoying individual who looks at the one to two line poem and can’t help but wonder: is this really poetry? I got my start as an intern at the Beloit Poetry Journal, whose editors tout their openness to the long form. So, I suppose I could blame my poetic upbringing for this prejudice, but I think it might also just be in my nature. In my own work, it feels a bit hollow to drop one to two lines on a page. However, Darling’s hyper-concise work leaves space for the reader’s imagination in a way that seems neither lazy nor unfulfilling. It’s one of those rare books of fragmentary and spare verse that I find so enviable.

At the beginning of this book, Darling sets out a series of six prose poems which hone in on the detailed interactions between Madeleine and the connoisseur—the two characters who inhabit Darling’s decorous landscapes. The work falls into contained blocks on the page. The titles are simple—“The Box,” “The Elegy”—and call to my mind titles from the work of Vasco Popa in Homage to the Lame Wolf. And like Popa’s work, this plain format gives the exactingly illustrated imagery an uninterrupted center stage. For example, this is the closing to the book’s opening poem.

                                                       Alone with her
sanctimonious parcel, its blue paper wrapping,
and cluster of green ribbons, Madeleine heard
the old piano’s most delicate song drifting from
beneath the lid. Around the box, a disconcerting
stillness. Snow falling outside the great white
house as she danced and danced.

“The Box”

The other poems display a similar enchantment with light, color, and grandeur: “a red silk string,” “their endless glass buttons,” and “the cold blue arms of that evening.”

If Darling writes in movements, the next movement echoes back some of the chorus of the previous melodies. The next six poems are erasures of the previous section, only each of the poems has been winnowed down to a spare set of lines. One poem becomes merely:

The ocean.
                                              His          harp singing
             against the darkest                          room.

“Untitled”

From the start, Darling asks the reader to play the role of detective or perhaps just intrigued observer, made to wonder: what is the locket? What is this ceremony which seems to govern the routine of the story’s protagonists (or perhaps antagonists)? What are these lives we’ve been invited into?

I’ve compared Darling’s work to that of David Lynch before, and while the example still holds true in that both manipulate a sort of dream logic, let me offer a more immediate visual analogy. Imagine a film was cut into five minute sections, and an audience was shown six of those sections at random. In each clip, the audience could familiarize themselves with a recurring set of characters, but the role or motives of each character would be impossible to discern with any clarity. Like this audience might, in Compendium, I find myself focusing on the objects of the characters’ obsessions and the visuals of the creator. In essence, if anyone is reading to the last page of Compendium to uncover what’s in the “unusual box” from the first poem or why the slipper makes Madeline weep, they’re not going to find any answers. But that’s the true seduction of this book: its willingness to give its readers just enough to leave them desperately curious and a little enamored. Compendium is in media res taken to the extreme.

The last half of the book explores many of the writer’s obsessions or anxieties—dance, entrapment, the idea of the palimpsest. However, they are presented in the form of footnotes. While some of the footnotes claim to be derived from texts or concrete items, the book also includes a set of footnotes to “desire” and “architecture”. As in much surreal work, the work explores fears of being consumed or subsumed by the objects of desire:

*
A circle of violets etched into the walls of the jewelry
box. Only when she lifted its lid would the
gears in her heart begin to turn.

or, in another example:

1. An unpublished vignette, in which the heroine
believes her voice is trapped inside her mother’s
gold cigarette case.

The section (and the book) closes with a mysterious countdown entitled “An Introduction to the Lyric Ode,” which includes one of the book’s most striking metaphors:

2. A hollow murmur. Every violet burned to the
ground.

“An Introduction to the Lyric Ode”

When considering Kristina Marie Darling’s work, fellow reviewer Emilia Fuentes Grant wrote: “It’s unsettling at first, conjuring a certain sense of incompleteness. Then, after the first few poems, the reader recognizes [the white space] as necessary, similar to a rest between the movements of a symphony.” And while this book may not explore the life of the musician as her previous work did, Darling’s work still comes in symphonic movements, and its author has only heightened the diminuendo that has become a hallmark of her work. If for nothing else, read this book for her Darling’s devotion to silence that allows such alliterative and lavish language as the “pearl earring glistening beside a lifeless clock” or “in every necklace a cluster of nervous stars” to shine.

____________

Kyle McCord is the author of two books of poetry. His first book, Galley of the Beloved in Torment, was the winner of the 2008 Orphic Prize. His second book, co-written with Jeannie Hoag, is a book of epistolary poems entitled Informal Invitations to a Traveler from Gold Wake Press. He has work forthcoming or featured in Boston Review, Columbia Poetry Journal, Cream City Review, Gulf Coast, Volt and elsewhere. He lives in Des Moines where he teaches and co-coordinates the Younger American Poets Reading Series and edits iO: A Journal of New American Poetry.

July 14th, 2011

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Valentina Gnup

WE SPEAK OF AUGUST

                    Alone in my kitchen, I copy
a chicken salad recipe from a Woman’s Day magazine
and plan tomorrow night’s dinner.

                    We don’t know what will happen
between one raindrop and the next,
yet we speak of August as if it were a contract,
a promise the sky made.

                    When I was twenty-five I married a drummer
and silenced him with disapproval.

                    Now I’m married to a poet—
he reads poems on the porch
and pets my head like a puppy.

                    My daughters grew tall as honeysuckle and left—
they took their soft skin, their buttermilk biscuit smell,
the endless hungers that organized my days.

                    My domain has shrunk to the narrow bone of my ankle.

                    I did what was asked.
I did what I feared.
Like every woman I have ever known,
I became my mother.

                    I stroll through the rows of houses and yards;
above me a skein of geese break in and out of formation—
fluid as laundry on a line.

                    Other women are out walking their dogs,
murmuring to the mothers inside their heads.

                    In the eastern sky the first star is out,
preparing for the long night of wishes.

                    At dusk every flower looks blue.

from Rattle #34, Winter 2010
Rattle Poetry Prize Honorable Mention

July 13th, 2011

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Tony Gloeggler

TRADING PLACES OR OUT AMONG
THE MISSING AND LOST

Maybe I was on the D train
methodically making my way
to a Yankee Stadium day game
when some legless beggar rolled
slowly through the car holding
a paper cup in his clenched teeth.
While I wondered if he was faking
like Eddie Murphy in Trading Places
or if his legs were really blown to bits
outside a Vietnam village in 1968,
my friend Dave leaned over, took
a handful of change from his pocket.

I think I thought about India, how
I once heard or read that fathers
would mangle, cut off a limb or two
for added sympathy when their children
were old enough to hit the streets, beg
Americans for money. I couldn’t help
but remember when I was five years old,
a cripple with a heavy iron brace strapped
down my left leg, a Frankenstein boot
on my other foot and everybody stared
at poor poor pitiful embarrassed me
as I shut my eyes, tried to disappear
to a place where no one could find me
and taught myself never to ask
for anything from anyone as that guy
raised his eyes, nodded thanks.

I was hoping Pettitte was pitching
as Dave started talking body parts,
which one he’d least like to lose
in a sudden drunk driving accident
or to some unnamed mysterious disease.
When he swore he’d rather die than lose
his cock, we both laughed as the train
chugged toward the Bronx. I don’t know
if he was afraid of the pain, worried
about the humiliation of pissing through
a thin tube or whether he was already
missing all the women he imagined
one day fucking, carefully calculating
degrees and fractions of how much
less of a man it would make him feel.
I doubt if he was imagining his wife,
pregnant with hopefully his second son
and all the times lying next to her
wishing he could masturbate in peace.

I’d already realized I’d never get to use
my cock as often as I daydreamed
and I was tired of being worn down
by expectations and unfulfilled promise.
A few fantasies had even come true
but still didn’t turn out nearly as good
as I imagined. Besides, I was always
afraid of losing my eyes, my sight
since I stood in the back of first grade
unable to read the eye chart. No,
I couldn’t make out that big black E
no matter how hard or often Sister Carolina
hit it with her pointer as the kids
all laughed louder and later made fun
of my thick framed glasses. Even now
when I sleep, I keep a hallway light on,
worried about crazy nightmares, chased
by slow motion zombies and falling
helplessly into the gaping black holes
of where their eyeballs should be.

Whenever I see a blind person walking
the streets of NYC with their gentle dog
or tapping and sweeping their cane
as they slowly make their way down
subway steps, I want to follow them
everywhere they go, introduce myself
and ask them question after question
in a too loud, silly sing-song tone
about fearlessness and darkness,
what kind of music they like, if
they’ve lost or found God, how
trapped or angry, crazy and lonely
they feel, if they’d like to hang out,
go for a cup of coffee or tea, find
a bar and drink until we sing karaoke,
get into a brawl, puke and pass out.

Me, I’d probably stay in bed, pray
it wasn’t too late to become
an old black Mississippi blues man,
wait for my friends and family
to drop off food and shopping bags
filled with bootleg CDs, listen
to baseball on a tiny transistor radio,
perfect helplessness, wither deeper
into myself and my limited imagination,
miss the things I did, didn’t, and will
never get to do, everything I never
watch carefully enough, the ugliness,
the beauty I turn too quickly away from.
I’d miss everything new and exciting
I somehow might someday stumble upon.

from Rattle #34, Winter 2010
Tribute to Mental Health Workers

July 12th, 2011

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Kate Gleason

WHILE READING SCIENTIFIC AMERICAN AND AMNESTY
INTERNATIONAL
BETWEEN CALLS AT THE HELP
HOTLINE, MY CO-WORKER ASKS ME WHY THERE’S
NO THERAPISTS-WITHOUT-BORDERS

The mother of the suicide bomber
who entered a temple with his own idea of heaven

strapped to his body will never come to see us,
nor the woman who carried her fetus nearly full term

till it stopped moving at a check point,
nor the man whose young daughter was forced to be a soldier

and “bush wife” to some rebel commander—stories
beyond anything talking could cure.

* * *

Scientists say every galaxy has its black hole.
They’re working in concert with a thousand telescopes

to photograph what they visualize as a squashed teardrop.

* * *

Grief has its own clock, a face under hands.

* * *

We know that time and space
create an intricate fabric, dented where things

rest heaviest. Where nothing is strongest,
a little funnel forms.

* * *

What do we know of use to the parents of those children?

* * *

A singularity
produces unfathomable gravity.

* * *

What void would that eight-year-old’s father hear
in our taught response:

“How do you feel about that? Can you say a little more?”

from Rattle #34, Winter 2010
Tribute to Mental Health Workers

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