May 31st, 2010

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D’Anne Witkowski

WAITING FOR A TUNE-UP AT SUPERIOR AUTO,
FERNDALE, MICHIGAN

A dark-haired man tells us
that Baghdad was never a beautiful city.
He talks of railroads, Hitler, and oil.
“If I talked like this back there
I would be hanged.” His laughter is crude, thick.
He fills a paper cup with water,
points at the TV each time he says “Americans.”

California is on fire. The reporters talk
over images of mortgaged matchsticks,
the dust, the heat miles from their ash-free eyes.

The man says he fell in love
with an American woman: Diane.
She’s surprised, he says, about how bad
things have gotten in Iraq. He isn’t.
“I’ve been to twelve countries.”
The woman next to me offers that she’s been to Israel,
as Americans who are Jewish or love Jesus do.

The California sky is black, a smoldering halo.
The country lamenting the loss of big houses
built in the middle of a brush pile.

“You know if I ask you a question and you don’t answer
it’s a yes in the Middle East?”
The woman says nothing. I say nothing.
Neither of us, as we watch
wind carry fire and men carry water,
know what we’ve just agreed to.

from Rattle #23, Summer 2005

May 30th, 2010

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Review by Alan SchneiderWinter Tenor by Kevin Goodan

WINTER TENOR
by Kevin Goodan

Alice James Books
238 Main Street
Farmington, Me 04938
ISBN-13 978-1-882295-75-3
2009, 43 pp., $15.95
http://alicejamesbooks.org

Kevin Goodan’s second collection of poetry and prose poems, Winter Tenor, is a rare pleasure for poetry reviewers of any stripe. The unity of theme throughout the work makes the work readily accessible and indeed obviates the necessity of titles for its constituent pieces–they are all subsumed under Winter Tenor. Within its pages Goodan’s speaker explores a wholly organic relation to the land of the mid-western farmer and the natural cycles of which he is a part. These poems are refreshingly free of moral judgment and shallow didacticism, invoking the spirit of the pastoral sans the idealized vision that has traditionally accompanied that genre.

These pieces arise from the observance of, for lack of a better phrase, the necessities of farm life. Observed through the eyes of a mostly-passive speaker, events are rendered with an elegant simplicity which brings with it an implicit understanding that what occurs—what the reader sees, the beauty, the harshness, and the brutality of the land—is is neither more nor less than the facts of that life. This is evident even in the opening poem which ends:

The mare rubs her neck against your shoulder
And you smack her away–
The pneumatic sigh hoaring
The long, unshaved hairs of her snot,
Her great-roomed eyes–
You punch her nape but she does not shy.
It is then you hear blood puddling the snow.

This is not to say, however, that Goodan’s speaker is indifferent. There is passion here as well, restrained (sometimes only barely) but all the more palpable for that restraint:

Came blizzard came lambs stillborn
Came ravens cawing from pine
Snow hazarding every breath shadows
Lost their balance fled a lantern
Lighted but light is lost
In whiteness the stamping ewes
Coo around dark stains
Every direction overwhelmed bodies
Iced-up cawing

Here one might see Goodan’s linguistic prowess at work as well. Though the words are simple, there is enough newness in the way they are used to grip us firmly and propel us forward through short, muscular lines and impart the feeling of near-panic which lies under their surface.

Yet one of the greatest joys a book can offer is the disclosure of new secrets each time it is read and thus even with that propulsion—the desire the language of the poem instills in the reader to press forward—Goodan ensures that meaning appears on multiple valences (in the above case by means of syntactic ambiguity created by his heavy enjambment) He ensures rewards to the reader who will take their time, go back, and read again.

Goodan’s simple, non-judgmental word-choice combined with the fresh manner in which he brings those words together is perhaps the genius of the work. It renders such images as a rabbit caught by a hawk in a new light with the simple choice of a different verb—one without the connotations often ascribed to “caught”:

Dark shapes darting in the stagnant
Weedy water of a ditch, drying tufts
Of a rabbit chosen by a hawk.

The violence of the image is mitigated by that word, “chosen,” and thus the impulse to judge is not fueled. One thing, however, which might be worrisome to the reader of Goodan would be, in all his linguistic inventiveness, his occasional lapse into the conceptual world, drawing the reader from the concrete imagery his deft strokes paint so vividly in the mind. For some reader such lines as “The tolerances between which we almost prevail,” spoken in relation to “..a comma sizzling on bright tin/That is the body of a nestling dropped by a hawk–” might seem abstruse and perhaps overly intellectual. The good news, however, is that such lines are few and far between and that Goodan, in fine form as a poetic artist, lets the images tell the story.

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Alan Schneider is a graduate student with the creative writing program at Sacramento State University in Sacramento California.

May 29th, 2010

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David Filer

FOXGLOVE: DIGITALIS PURPUREA

Once only a gray-green mat, like the weeds
That have survived winter in the bare ground
Around the roses. Now some spark has set
Them off, their green rocket tips, gently bent
Like hemlocks, at five feet and growing
Still, trailing plumes of blossoms, white like
Snow in shadows, crimson speckles inside—
And shaking with bees, far up in their cones.
I know how this works. Like fierce aliens,
Their brief ambition sucks the energy
From the late-spring day, first from the cats
That lay depleted under cool sword ferns,
Then me, willing to put my yard work aside,
Give what I can, these lines, to their brilliant ride.

from Rattle #23, Spring 2005
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May 28th, 2010

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Tim Suermondt

THE VALID CLUMSINESS OF ROSES

“Are those for me?”
the woman asks the man
who’s standing stupidly
in the doorway,
holding the red roses.

The man wants to say
“No, they’re for the Super—
of course they’re for you!”
but he merely
hands her the roses
and says: “Who else?”

The woman invites him in—
“These deserve something special”
and she disappears
into a blue bedroom.

The man sees a painting—
a couple together
on a park bench,
both of them staring
in a different direction.

“Boy, I’ve seen this before”
the man says to himself
and he knows
that were either
able to remember the other
many years from now—

the memory would be free
of fanfare, quiet
as confetti falling
on the moon.

“Do you like it?”
she woman asks,
showing a green vase
loaded with roses.
“It’s almost pretty as you”
the man says,
and he thinks he meant
to say just that.

from Rattle #23, Summer 2005

May 27th, 2010

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Glenn McKee

LATE FRAGMENT*

My glass regardless of its contents
is full of Now—so full of Now

I can drink my fill without fear
of Now going out of business.

When unable to bend an elbow,
I take my Now through a straw.

*Glenn McKee passed away 1/11/04

from Rattle #23, Summer 2005

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