October 26th, 2009

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Douglas Woody Woodsum

FIRST PIG

You ever tried to get a pig in a truck?
I did last winter in the snow and frozen mud.
I made a ramp from scrap-wood
and leaned it against the back of the Chevy.
I remembered someone telling me,
“It takes two very strong but not very smart
men to get a pig in a truck.”
So I called my buddy, Lenny Dragon.
We scrummed around with that pig
for about a half-hour before we quit.
Lenny said, “I got my rifle in my truck;
a dead pig’s an easy-to-move pig,
and the damn thing’s going straight to the slaughterhouse.”
That sounded good to me; I was ready
to go at it with a baseball bat myself.
But that was my first pig; I wanted to do it right.
Everyone I knew delivered their pigs live.

When I got my pig, all I wanted was pork.
Seven months later, when I called Lenny
for help getting the pig to slaughter,
all I was thinking about was ham steak,
chops, and sausage; jury-rig a ramp,
apply a little muscle to the pig
and away we go. I didn’t know
how hard it is to get a pig in a truck.
Pigs are so low to the ground, they don’t budge.
Till they start fightin’ and put it in four wheel drive.

In a small town, word gets around.
Long after I got that pig in the truck,
I couldn’t go anywhere without a barb
or two of pig lore. The next time I make a fool
of myself, I pray to God it won’t be in winter.
Farmers got too much free time then,
too much sitting in greasy spoons
or around woodstoves talking about whose ass
is muddy and whose boot’s full of snow.
Since that day with the pig, I’ve heard it all,
why it’s so hard to get a pig in a truck:
“Pigs don’t like change,” or “Pigs can smell death.”
One friend pointed to this almanac passage:

“When preparing to slaughter your pig,
keep in mind that pigs seem to know
what is about to happen to them.”
If I’d’ve known, I might’ve raised chickens.

What finally happened was Lenny was cold,
wet, and threatening to leave. I said, “Hold on;
I got an idea.” I called the oldest farmer I knew.
He was decent, allowed as how he’d had a few pig scrapes
in his day. He said, “Put a five gallon bucket
on that pig’s head. Lift up one rear leg,
and use it like a tiller. Steer that pig backwards
with that raised leg. Drag and push the bast’d
right up your ramp. Don’t stop once you start.”

The old man was right. Once we got the bucket
on the pig’s head and one rear leg in the air,
it was easy as pissin’ in a boot.
The farmer got a slab of bacon
for his advice. Yup, he made it easy
but for one part: You ever tried
to put a five gallon bucket on a pig’s head?

from Rattle #27, Summer 2007

October 25th, 2009

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Review by Haley Larson

THE SPIDER SERMONS
by Robert Krut

BlazeVOX [books]
14 Tremaine Ave.
Kenmore, NY 14217
ISBN 9781935402121
2009, 72 pp., $16.00

http://blazevox.org

Robert Krut’s newest collection of poems, The Spider Sermons, crawls with surprising grace through disheartened gloom. What could easily have evolved into a “world is dark” mentality instead crafts a magical underlying hopefulness, a set of eyes which grope and pull from all reaches of the universe in the hopes of something steadfast—an answer perhaps, even God. Krut exploits this universe in his images, teases its imbalance and imperfection into a meaningful yet questionable establishment of our existence. With a most musical and loaded pulse, the weighty meditations of his poems envelop the reader through a guided rise and fall of sound and imagery, still presenting enough dissonance to avoid a pretty package of clichés.

The dissension of recurring images creates balance, yet Krut always keeps us a bit uneasy–as though the next line might tip the scales, catapulting over a desperate edge. Growth and convergence are readily tangible, and they feed each other within stanzas and even single lines. In one poem, we are engulfed in fire and water, God and man, heaven and earth. Such images swell then narrow, and a resulting energy churns throughout this poet’s work. For instance, from “Tear Logic,” the image of God’s “tears the size of Asia forming oceans” brilliantly focuses into a stark assertion:

But you don’t believe in God,
and it’s you-
your own feet in a puddle wet
with your own tears-

Looking for creation, and admitting
somewhat regretfully,
somewhat sadly for knowing
that it starts right here.

Krut’s imagery creates distance and space. As a reader, that changing volume is transformative, allowing that I may become smaller, larger, more significant, or less concrete than I truly am. In “Lava Sphere, Sky Sphere,” the distance from subject to object quickly morphs in the lines: “…on an unnamed Walk of Fame star, / just past dusk, looking up, / thinking she can touch a plane above her.” I encounter a tangible shift in spacial awareness from a small iconic street marker to a flying vehicle filled with people, thousands of feet above earth.

The images themselves create moments of delight in metaphors and thoughtful disparity, often speaking to a greater wondering of our authenticity. One returning comparison in Krut’s poems includes that of stone and the body. In “Gravitypants Rocketboy,” Krut creates a fragile image: “…when I was young, I moved with the grace // of a pair of cement legs on glass-face earth.” Physical fragility and furthermore human fragility are in question throughout much of the book. Building on this, in “If, Then,” a stunning moment plays within the words:

a dragon loosens itself as fog
from the cliffs, inhales.

Tail of the beast,
lifted cloud scales, the strongest
for knowing this all
does not exist.

The final few lines, from an image of nature breeding mystical nightmare, emphasize the question that echoes throughout this collection of poems: what is truth and what is fiction?

Krut’s use of musicality blends suppleness with cacophony. Both consonance and assonance are at great use within this collection. For example, in “Misplaced Child,” Krut crafts velvety lulls that rise and fall through a small boy who “watches a locust sail / the silk face of a lily pad.” “The Bakery” vividly contrasts this elasticity in its spondaic opening stanza:

In a ginger-bake skull home,
an oven hut ash face,
a forest-armed grasp-force
pulls capes near from ghosts.

Additionally, in “Neon” Krut creates a melodic stanza through skillful assonance: “Swallowing hot broth, the thought: / we do not become more enlightened / with each life at all.” This crescendo and decrescendo of sound mirror the parallel manipulation of space within his images. It is here, in the relationship between musicality and image, that Krut demonstrates his craft, a craft well worth consuming.

Krut’s use of musical techniques and imagistic balance allow his poems to breathe in the midst of otherwise bleak and beaten realizations, a sermon of wonder and hopelessness begging to be proven wrong. While such an examination of existence holds the potential to fall flat in the hands of a trite poet, Krut weaves life and thus significance into this inspection. Kazim Ali tidily summarizes the tumultuous zeal that brilliantly converges within this collection of poems: “It’s the most passionate of come-ons, but with the kindest of intentions.”

Truth versus fiction. Krut’s own words from “Rope” present a startling assertion: “…I can have what I want, but if I am blind / I don’t have to choose.” Krut’s work assures us that the universe provides plentiful distraction, enough that we may never have to choose between the two.

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Haley Larson will pursue her MFA at Colorado State University this fall. She previously studied at Kingston University in London and the University of Nebraska-Lincoln where she earned a BA in Psychology. Most recently at Arizona State University, she received a Swarthout Writing Award and served as a Poetry Editor for Issue 3 of Superstition Review, where two of her interviews appear. She is an avid traveler and musician. She can be contacted at haleylarson@gmail.com.

October 24th, 2009

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Allen C. Fischer

FLOATERS

Black snow…one flake, then
another. They don’t go anywhere,
don’t come down but drift,
float within my eyes like microfeathers
caught in delay,
suspended in a trance of space.
Space, the once and future window
that relays my life across its lens,
shore to shore across expectation
and everything I fear.
Space of my slowing and eventual
bedside. Arithmetic so simple, a clock
so regimental, I don’t try to change it,

don’t try to rub the tiny shadows away
or remove the specks come loose from the back
of my eyes. After all, they’re temporary
debris, at worst the body’s storm warnings.
Don’t! my mother would call. Nothing you can do,
advised the doctor, like weather, it will pass.
And maybe the woman in white at the end of the room
is not a nurse but my wife in a beach robe,
and the cloud around her is the packing in which
memory comes; and maybe the occasional
flashes I see are not a storm but stars trying
to break through the ominous forecast: black snow,
blinding at times; accumulation heavy; falling
temperatures; stay tuned, stay where you are.

from Rattle #24, Winter 2005

October 23rd, 2009

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Anis Mojgani

CRADLE

Set the warriors to sea in a ship stacked with shields, layers of swords, mountains of gold. Lay them out with their wife. With their child. Lay them out with their livestock, with the whole farm. The rain is not coming here. Not today. For today the gods welcome one of their own back home. So set the hero out on the soft waves that will carry him to the other side of the pink ether where he will float on fire until the ash consumes him like the mighty warrior he once was and like the legend he will become. The flames will dance over his possessions, his goblets and arrows, his blankets, his paintings, his passions. The flames will dance across his flesh like the soft fingers of the soft lover he left, and as he sleeps this last sleep, the fires will eat him away, the heat will write his skin across the night sky to join the constellations that will guide the sailors at storm, the herders lost in the clouds, they will all come home by facing the direction his eyes are facing. The heavens are filled with smoke. This is history this is legend this is what we once were. Where the stories come from, what we are. When you fall in battle, they will take your body with the life you made in this world and set it off to sail behind you into the next, so that you will stay a king, remain forever the golden being you breathed as on this side of the mountain. When you pass, may your life follow you like a shadow into the light. When I go, bury me with nothing but my own skin. I spent far too many days trying to outrun this thing called mine, so if I set myself into your arms would you hold me like the earth, quietly? I am yours. Give me a field, give me a big sky. A mountain. Give me your mouth. I’m just looking for a quiet place that I could die inside of.

from Rattle #27, Summer 2007
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October 22nd, 2009

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Vince Gotera

CHEWING GUM UPSKIRT

On the Avenue of the Americas,
at noon two weeks ago Tuesday, a nun
paced the grimy concrete, robed in black,
a starched, white veil framing her stunning face,
one-in-a-million supermodel cheekbones.

Fifth grade, St. Agnes School, we boys bet on
whether Sister Helen had hair beneath
her wimple. Blonde? Redhead? A pageboy cut?
Fishnets under her floor-length skirt? She shone
in daydreams: rosary beads against nude skin.

Today, my six-year-old son wriggled under
the deck, a crawl space half-lit by thin slits
of sky between planks. The yellow pencil
he had dropped, a long-lost fork, an ancient
pack of bubble gum—pushed up through the cracks.

Near Manila, my father in fifth grade
would plead some urgency—bathroom break?
dizziness?—to get himself out of class,
then shimmy underneath just such a floor,
gaps between boards to let in cool river air

for Miss Persephone Burke of Nebraska,
a Thomasite teacher. Frilly white blouse,
red belt, navy blue skirt sweeping the floor.
For a marvelous prank and bragging rights,
he would hide a slim, yard-long bamboo cane

with a small pyramid of Wrigley’s gum
panhandled from American soldiers.
Giggling to himself, he would chew and chew
until a hearty glob perched on the end
of the rod. Crouching directly below

Miss Burke, he’d reach up gingerly and stick
the wad into her underclothes. A boy
straining after what he could not have,
joy and bliss forever beyond his grasp:
America, Lady Liberty, the stars.

from Rattle #24, Winter 2005
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