Comments on: “My Problem with the World” by Brenda Paro http://www.rattle.com/poetry/2009/08/my-problem-with-the-world-by-brenda-paro/ Poetry for Everyone. Wed, 23 May 2012 21:21:14 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Miki http://www.rattle.com/poetry/2009/08/my-problem-with-the-world-by-brenda-paro/#comment-236 Miki Mon, 30 Nov 2009 05:04:56 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=1881#comment-236 awesome! awesome!

]]> By: emjo http://www.rattle.com/poetry/2009/08/my-problem-with-the-world-by-brenda-paro/#comment-235 emjo Sun, 08 Nov 2009 08:44:20 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=1881#comment-235 damn. that's all i've got. damn. that’s all i’ve got.

]]> By: Paul http://www.rattle.com/poetry/2009/08/my-problem-with-the-world-by-brenda-paro/#comment-234 Paul Mon, 02 Nov 2009 04:28:08 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=1881#comment-234 Love it! Wasn't sure exactly what you were trying to say at first, but that toilet analogy was surprisingly effective. Lost rhythm a little somewhere around the book store clerk, but recovered and overall; has a strong impression... Very well put together! Love it!

Wasn’t sure exactly what you were trying to say at first, but that toilet analogy was surprisingly effective.

Lost rhythm a little somewhere around the book store clerk, but recovered and overall; has a strong impression…

Very well put together!

]]> By: Andrew http://www.rattle.com/poetry/2009/08/my-problem-with-the-world-by-brenda-paro/#comment-233 Andrew Fri, 30 Oct 2009 06:16:51 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=1881#comment-233 i enjoyed it until the bookstore and ass kinda lost the flow after that but good work! i enjoyed it until the bookstore and ass kinda lost the flow after that but good work!

]]> By: Your Daily Poetry | Seattle News on Twitter http://www.rattle.com/poetry/2009/08/my-problem-with-the-world-by-brenda-paro/#comment-232 Your Daily Poetry | Seattle News on Twitter Tue, 18 Aug 2009 19:31:34 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=1881#comment-232 [...] Swindle, I wouldn’t have found this poem, “My Problem With the World,” by Brenda Paro in Rattle. It begins like [...] [...] Swindle, I wouldn’t have found this poem, “My Problem With the World,” by Brenda Paro in Rattle. It begins like [...]

]]> By: Fred http://www.rattle.com/poetry/2009/08/my-problem-with-the-world-by-brenda-paro/#comment-231 Fred Tue, 18 Aug 2009 02:31:39 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=1881#comment-231 Jesus, this Bitch is hard core! I dig it. Jesus, this Bitch is hard core! I dig it.

]]> By: Lady Mariposa http://www.rattle.com/poetry/2009/08/my-problem-with-the-world-by-brenda-paro/#comment-230 Lady Mariposa Mon, 17 Aug 2009 22:13:07 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=1881#comment-230 Dang! This is so powerful, thank you, I needed to be woken up from my lazy summer, i must write, thank you! Dang! This is so powerful, thank you, I needed to be woken up from my lazy summer, i must write, thank you!

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